Friday, May 1, 2020
About Pirates
In Literacy we learnt about Pirates. This was really fun to make but the writing was the most fun.Did you know why people became Pirates?
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Hi there Bree
ReplyDeleteI really liked your pirate writing. Next time try adding a background to brighten up your presentation. You had lots of dialogue in your story and it would be great to add speech marks. The thing to remember is to start a new line when a new character speaks. That is a great writing goal. Keep up the awesome effort.!