Thursday, March 5, 2020
This is just to say Bk
In literacy we had to create a poem that was started by William Carlos Williams. I wrote my poem about 3 year old me grabbing my dads new phone and breaking it.Have you ever broke your Dads new phone before?
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Hi!! Good job on your first post. Good luck with the next!
ReplyDeleteweldone bree and hahahahahah
ReplyDeleteKia ora Breana
ReplyDeleteOh no, did you really break your Dad's new phone? They are shiny and tempting to pick up especially when they are new. There weren't a lot of cell phones around when I was growing up but now everyone has them. What do you think you will blog about next from home? Great job!
Hi Bree! Its Molly I liked how you did your slide, But maybe add a colourful or designed background to bring out the affection in the words. Other than that you did really good. Maybe next time try not to rush it if you were rushing. Keep up the good work!! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Molly But Mr Sutherland said to do a normal back ground
DeleteBy Bree